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VENDOR ON VICTORIA STATION

there was nothing to drink, except some old rotten milk someone left in the sink. And there’s no ring

“Mars bar, please.”

“60p.”

“Cheers.”

there’s no reason to call. I passed out on the floor. Smoked myself stupid and drank my insides raisin dry.

But at the right place, at the

“Can I have a bottle of Fanta please, mate?”

“£1.50.”

“Got change for a fiver?”

“Yeah.”

I won’t have to quit doing fucked up shit for


NOTES:
I wanted to do something a little different, because it's only been two characters since a shop assistant last had their hands on the pound coin. Instead of developing another backstory for a character who's really only a conduit for the coin to pass between unconnected strangers, I decided to play around with the style. I did consider writing some of these bits in the first person, but in the end, this was the nearest I got. We don't hear the vendor's thoughts, but we do hear what he is hearing, which is "Private Eye" by Alkaline Trio, a song I was listening to a lot at the time I wrote it. I tried other songs, but this was the best fit.

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